Thursday, August 1, 2013

Chapter one of my first short story!


When Love breaks all Laws
Lingering stares, adorable smiles, two different countries

There I was, an all American girl, staring into the eyes of a Dominican man in the city of Santiago when he told me he loved me.

It all began when I came to visit my best friend Lindsey and her family who had recently moved to Santiago.  We had a huge itinerary planned to explore all over the country and we did.   However little did I know that Lindsey and her husband Alberto had a blind double date planned for me the night I arrived!  There we sat, the four of us, at dinner at one of Alberto’s favorite restaurants Tablon, which faces Santiago’s Monument.  I cannot begin to tell you how awkward this was!  Now would be a good time to mention that Pablo, my date, doesn’t speak any English and I am lucky I have a high school level knowledge of Spanish!  Alberto did most of the work carrying on the conversation with Pablo while Lindsey noticed that Pablo sure did smile at me a lot from across the table.  After dinner things loosened up just a little as Pablo took photos of my friend and me around the Monument although the language barrier was still apparent. 

The following Monday Lindsey and Alberto invited Pablo over for game night with another couple, Maria and Marco.  This was fun but still mainly consisted of the most adorable smiles and little communication.  Oh and yes his smile is adorable…his whole self is actually rather attractive! My flight was scheduled to leave in two days but I was thinking about staying longer for the Enrique Iglesias concert in Punta Cana.  This helped bring up something to talk about this evening. “So you like Enrique Iglesias?” I responded in the affirmative, Marco then tapped Pablo on the shoulder and chuckled while making a short comment in Spanish.  Thinking that he was making fun of my love of Enrique, I turned to Alberto and asked what he said, to which Alberto responded, “He just told Pablo that he should be taking notes.” Marco continued to ask several questions about myself and loudly stated: “Hey, I’m just trying to help my friend here.”  How awkward…language barrier or not!

Two days later this group of six of us had a very pivotal movie night.  Of course Lindsey and our friend, Maria, had arranged the seating just perfectly so Pablo would sit by me. At this point there was an obvious mutual physical attraction.  Who doesn’t want an attractive man to cuddle with during a movie?  So as much as I like to let the guy make the first move I leaned back on the couch and put my head on the pillow just enough to give him the opportunity to put his arm around me but he didn’t.  I sat through the first part of the movie just watching his little hand, and by little I mean ginormous hand, sitting on his leg and watching it twitch and move towards mine.  Finally he got the guts to just do it and it went from hand holding to resting our heads together while all scrunched up on a little couch.   Not to mention all of the other non-verbal communication that occurred from lingering stares to adorable yet prolonged smiles.   Sometimes when we stare for so long, I get this huge pit in my stomach and just think, OMG you’re so attractive. After the movie, everyone strategically left and both of the guys made sure Pablo knew he could stay as long as he wanted.  We managed to carry on a bit more conversation and shared more really amazing smiles.  He asked if he could take me out to dinner Friday night so we could have the chance to talk more and get to know one another. Then both the inevitable and almost unbelievable happened.  He kissed me!  I mean he really kissed me and we enjoyed the rest of our evening.  Of course immediately after our make out session I ran into Lindsey’s room to tell her all about it!

Apparently Island time occurred on Friday when Pablo showed up 45 minutes late for our date.  Only after the date did I find out Pablo left a message with Alberto that he’d be late but somehow this slipped Alberto’s mind to tell me. We went to the mall for some food but he also saw the movie theater in the mall and asked if I’d rather do that.  Since I was no longer hungry from the butterflies in my stomach and the lateness I decided a movie would be fine.  I could tell this man didn’t watch many movies with how fidgety he was and he didn’t even know who the main character, Wolverine, was.  He put his arm around me and held my hand again and we were comfortable on our date.  At least physically comfortable…we still struggled to make conversation but were slowly progressing.  When we got back to Lindsey’s house, you can only guess what happened when we sat on the couch!  We were simply making out when Pablo stopped suddenly and told me he needed to go, or at least that’s what I thought he said with my limited Spanish.  After a minute he began kissing me again which followed by another even more sudden stop and a firm statement that he needed to get home.  He stood straight up, walked to the door, turned in what seemed like an attempt to kiss me goodnight but stopped himself, and continued for the door. I didn’t feel like anything inappropriate was going on but I sure felt like Potiphar’s wife when Joseph fled the scene in biblical times!  He didn’t even say goodbye like he did the previous night.  He just walked to the door and left.  I was stunned.

Somehow after all this drama, Pablo got the nerve to ask me out again.  Unfortunately he got stuck cleaning the church this evening so I decided to go and help him.  He walked me home holding my hand and kissed me good night at the door.  Alberto’s aunt was over so I didn’t invite him in and luckily this prevented any more action from occurring too soon.  We sure didn’t need any more fleeing of the scene!   I was too nervous to address what had happened the previous night especially with my poor Spanish so I decided to just let us naturally try and move past it.

On Sunday night Alberto and Lindsey invited Pablo for dinner at their home.  We all had a good time together and once again Lindsey and Alberto slipped away to their room allowing Pablo to stay over as long as he’d like.  By now we were getting much better at communicating and realized that we have the same goals for religion and family.  We also couldn’t deny the physical attraction.  However was that enough?  Are we compatible as a couple?  How can we know when we don’t even speak the same language?  He doesn’t know the small things that make me who I am.  He doesn’t know the quirks in my personality that have come from my parents.  How is our relationship going to work when we both have families and jobs in different countries?  He’s in law school here in Santiago and all of his siblings reside here.  I have a career in the US and know that I can’t spend the rest of my life in the Dominican Republic…

There we sat after dinner trying to make conversation again.  Nicole understands quite a bit of Spanish!  If only I knew just a little bit of English.  I really really am enjoying spending time with this girl.  She’s beautiful and her hair, oh her hair!  I know she’s intelligent, she loves to laugh and I know she has the same goals for her future family as me.  I haven’t dated much but there have been plenty of interested girls.  Nicole is just different.  Maybe it’s the way she smiles or maybe it’s the way she laughs.  Maybe it’s her confidence or maybe it’s just her hair!  All I know is since she’s been here; I want to see her every day.  So of course after dinner, after we talked, I leaned in and kissed her.  I really like kissing her.  As we stood up when she was about to walk me to the door I took her in my arms and said “I love you.”  I said it in English just for her.  I was pretty quiet and unsure if she heard me so I cupped her delicate face in my hands I said “I Love you Nicole.”  She replied with a smile, an awkward giggle and finished her hug goodbye as I was leaving.  She smiled at me the whole way out as I walked to the elevator.  I smiled back but when I got in the elevator I hung my head low as I knew she didn’t say it back.  I looked up to see her still watching me and gave her a half smile before the elevator doors shut.

“Lindsey!  Lindsey!” I shouted as I stormed into her bedroom.  “What’s the one thing that would freak me out in this situation more than anything else?”  “He dropped the L-bomb!”  What was I supposed to do at this point?  I don’t love him; I don’t even know him!  But I want to get to know him and I’ve already extended my stay in the country once to do just that.  I’m supposed to leave in less than three days and now I’ve really got to get out of here before this gets any more out of hand!  At least that’s what I thought at first…after talking to several people I was somehow convinced to extend my stay again just one more week.  I only had to pay the $200 change fee for my flight and I had no major responsibilities in Minnesota for the week.  Alberto and Maria were probably my biggest influences in staying.  Alberto spoke from experience when deciding he wanted to marry Lindsey about why I should stay.  He told me if there was a chance that this could be my husband then what’s $200 and one week?  Why not use the time wisely and get to know him even more because you never know if this could be the one.  And if it’s not the one, is it really a struggle to lose $200 and spend another week on a tropical island?  Maria was also a strong influence reminding me that the most important things in a marriage are religion and family and since we have that, we have a pretty good shot.  I of course know that it takes way more than that for a marriage to be successful but Maria may have been onto something.  I decided to Skype my friend, Rachel, as the voice of reason as to whether or not to stay an extra week.  Rachel didn’t seem to be very reasonable this evening.  She too said if we already know that our big goals in life are aligned and we have a physical attraction, the only missing piece is whether or not we are compatible as a couple.  Why not take a week to continue working on that piece in person before going home and continuing the relationship via email?  Honestly, why is no one but me mentioning the fact that we live in different countries and speak different languages?!  Nonetheless I changed my ticket once again and extended my stay.

No comments:

Post a Comment